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last updated 2 years ago by gerard #
I altered the structure of the Abstract and re-worded things slightly. IMHO it is now more concise and reads better - what do you think? Is the idea to put suggested changes in a comment first, to gather opinion before editing?
Also, what about changing 'Abstract' to 'What is Python?' ? changing 'Front Matter' to 'Intro' or 'Welcome' ? moving the Copyright to an appendix, with maybe a link to it from here? These things give it a rather academic flavour in my view.
Gerard Flanagan
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"These things give it a rather academic flavour in my view."
I fully agree. Feel free to replace them.
effbot 2 years ago #

"Is the idea to put suggested changes in a comment first, to gather opinion before editing?"
Use your judgement. If the changes are extensive enough, working on a copy is probably best (see the note on the front pages).
effbot 2 years ago #